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Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Our Kiss




Our Kiss


 Your eyes look
Into my soul
Awakening it
From a listless stupor
It soars once again
To dance in
The flame of our love
I gaze into the
Fathomless depths
Of your love laden eyes
My tremulous lips
Raised
I wait for yours
To take mine.
Time stretches into eternity
Words …meaningless
And in that passionate silence
As I fall into your arms
And we become one
In that hungry kiss
A familiar desire
Stirs in our hearts
A knowing…
A homecoming…
A realization…
This is our kiss
Ageless, timeless
Felt across countless
Lifetimes…

38 comments:

  1. You have so much passion in you and it flows with your words..Really sensual and wonderful

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  2. that is a kiss thank you and god bless

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  3. God bless you Roy and thank you

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  4. It is the passion that is in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it...and Rimly,I know you must a great kisser...

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  5. Love passion emotions..You describe them all so vividly, I want to embrace the first lady I encounter after reading your poem. Powerful stuff!!

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  6. Ah THE KISS! makes my heart flutter!

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  7. Awesome poem about an equally awesome kiss, Rimly.....love your passion and depth of love.

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  8. absolutely beautiful! Your writing is amazing!

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  9. Yes Alapana nothing like a deep passionate kiss. Thank you sweetheart

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  10. Thank you so much Bernadine for your beautiful comment. Thank you for following. I am rushing off now to take a peek at your blogs.

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  11. Hey David I hope you do encounter a passionate lady who can kiss passionately. Thank you my friend

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  12. Hello Rimly -

    There is a sign down the hallway that said this is the place for kissing lessons. Is that true? Haha,,,just saying that's what it said!

    Amazing word combination here Rimly; "And in that passionate silence..As I fall into your arms..And we become one..In that hungry kiss.."

    Passionate silence, wow! Become one, wowza! Hungry Kiss, wowowza! Magical ma'am and nicely done for certain. :)

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  13. Wow...I remember that kiss...it is timeless...two souls coming together and remembering...thank you....I am following...

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  14. Will never take a kiss for granted again...what a beautiful poem!

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  15. Hi Charlie, are there really places where they teach you how to kiss? You are the expert on different kinds of kisses but I am sure glad you liked this special "kiss" of mine. Loved that post of yours, it had me in splits and kept me wondering which category I fall in. LOL!

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  16. Hi Ravenmyth thank you for your comment. Following you too

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  17. Much more than a kiss that is - beautifully put RImly

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  18. just a KISS for a KISS. no more words.

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  19. oh rimly...i ate your words... and made them part of me... i love your choice of words... from beginning to end... simple yet full of life... love love love it ;)... yummy right corinne? :P...

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  20. A kiss is never only a kiss, it means many other things and your post has just done that.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  21. Thank you Corrine for that Mmmmmmm... comment. It said it all.

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  22. Hi Sulekha I know you will understand the passion and depth of love. Thank you my friend

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  23. Swati a kiss can say a lot. Thank you sweetheart

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  24. Kriti and Sancheeta thank you so much. a kiss can say a lot of things without words

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  25. Melissa thank you, thank you, thank you.

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  26. Yes Susan, a kiss is never a kiss, it is much more than that. Thank you. xoxo

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  27. Cute post! and that image is AWESOME! :)
    Keep Writing ..

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  28. Thank you Simran. I am glad you like the image. Havent seen you around in a long time

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  29. I can sense the passion in the kiss, that's the type of connection we all seek from a lover. Nice post!!

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  30. I know David, some find it and some dont. Thank you

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  31. Rimly,

    A kiss with out passion is hardly worth having. I would rather know one passionate than have a thousand without any passion...
    xoxo
    Jess

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  32. I totally agree with you Jessica. xoxo

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  33. A beautiful way to describe a Kiss.. It was gentle & passionate in the ways the moves progressed.. Lovely..

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  34. Thank you Monu for commenting :)

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