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Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Our Kiss




Our Kiss


 Your eyes look
Into my soul
Awakening it
From a listless stupor
It soars once again
To dance in
The flame of our love
I gaze into the
Fathomless depths
Of your love laden eyes
My tremulous lips
Raised
I wait for yours
To take mine.
Time stretches into eternity
Words …meaningless
And in that passionate silence
As I fall into your arms
And we become one
In that hungry kiss
A familiar desire
Stirs in our hearts
A knowing…
A homecoming…
A realization…
This is our kiss
Ageless, timeless
Felt across countless
Lifetimes…

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38 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 18, 2011 at 11:28 AM

    Lovely

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  2. JIMMay 18, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    You have so much passion in you and it flows with your words..Really sensual and wonderful

    http://brandano19152.c4.cmdwebsites.com/blog/

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  3. Roy DurhamMay 18, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    that is a kiss thank you and god bless

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  4. RimlyMay 18, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    Thank you Jidhu

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  5. RimlyMay 18, 2011 at 12:00 PM

    Thank you as always Jim.

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  6. RimlyMay 18, 2011 at 12:01 PM

    God bless you Roy and thank you

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  7. Alpana JaiswalMay 18, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    It is the passion that is in a kiss that gives to it its sweetness; it is the affection in a kiss that sanctifies it...and Rimly,I know you must a great kisser...

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  8. DavidMay 18, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    Love passion emotions..You describe them all so vividly, I want to embrace the first lady I encounter after reading your poem. Powerful stuff!!

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  9. Savira GuptaMay 18, 2011 at 6:23 PM

    Ah THE KISS! makes my heart flutter!

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  10. sulekkhaMay 18, 2011 at 7:21 PM

    Awesome poem about an equally awesome kiss, Rimly.....love your passion and depth of love.

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  11. BernadineMay 18, 2011 at 8:02 PM

    absolutely beautiful! Your writing is amazing!

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  12. RimlyMay 18, 2011 at 9:53 PM

    Yes Alapana nothing like a deep passionate kiss. Thank you sweetheart

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  13. RimlyMay 18, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    Thank you so much Bernadine for your beautiful comment. Thank you for following. I am rushing off now to take a peek at your blogs.

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  14. RimlyMay 18, 2011 at 10:01 PM

    Hey David I hope you do encounter a passionate lady who can kiss passionately. Thank you my friend

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  15. bjbohlsMay 18, 2011 at 11:42 PM

    Hello Rimly -

    There is a sign down the hallway that said this is the place for kissing lessons. Is that true? Haha,,,just saying that's what it said!

    Amazing word combination here Rimly; "And in that passionate silence..As I fall into your arms..And we become one..In that hungry kiss.."

    Passionate silence, wow! Become one, wowza! Hungry Kiss, wowowza! Magical ma'am and nicely done for certain. :)

    http://charlienitric.wordpress.com/2011/04/26/4-ways-to-know-when-a-girls-kiss-is-all-wrong/

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  16. RavenmythMay 18, 2011 at 11:53 PM

    Wow...I remember that kiss...it is timeless...two souls coming together and remembering...thank you....I am following...

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  17. Corinne RodriguesMay 18, 2011 at 11:58 PM

    Mmmmmmm...;)

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  18. SwatiMay 19, 2011 at 12:04 AM

    Will never take a kiss for granted again...what a beautiful poem!

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  19. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 12:12 AM

    Hi Charlie, are there really places where they teach you how to kiss? You are the expert on different kinds of kisses but I am sure glad you liked this special "kiss" of mine. Loved that post of yours, it had me in splits and kept me wondering which category I fall in. LOL!

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  20. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 12:27 AM

    Hi Ravenmyth thank you for your comment. Following you too

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  21. KritiMay 19, 2011 at 3:31 AM

    Much more than a kiss that is - beautifully put RImly

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  22. fantasy in practicalityMay 19, 2011 at 5:33 AM

    just a KISS for a KISS. no more words.

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  23. Melissa TandocMay 19, 2011 at 5:33 AM

    oh rimly...i ate your words... and made them part of me... i love your choice of words... from beginning to end... simple yet full of life... love love love it ;)... yummy right corinne? :P...

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  24. S. Susan DeborahMay 19, 2011 at 6:34 AM

    A kiss is never only a kiss, it means many other things and your post has just done that.

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  25. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 8:02 AM

    Thank you Corrine for that Mmmmmmm... comment. It said it all.

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  26. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    Hi Sulekha I know you will understand the passion and depth of love. Thank you my friend

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  27. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 8:04 AM

    Swati a kiss can say a lot. Thank you sweetheart

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  28. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 8:11 AM

    Kriti and Sancheeta thank you so much. a kiss can say a lot of things without words

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  29. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    Melissa thank you, thank you, thank you.

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  30. RimlyMay 19, 2011 at 8:35 AM

    Yes Susan, a kiss is never a kiss, it is much more than that. Thank you. xoxo

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  31. SimranMay 21, 2011 at 6:52 AM

    Cute post! and that image is AWESOME! :)
    Keep Writing ..

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  32. RimlyMay 22, 2011 at 9:14 PM

    Thank you Simran. I am glad you like the image. Havent seen you around in a long time

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  33. DavidMay 28, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    I can sense the passion in the kiss, that's the type of connection we all seek from a lover. Nice post!!

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  34. RimlyMay 28, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    I know David, some find it and some dont. Thank you

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  35. Finding One's WayJune 1, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    Rimly,

    A kiss with out passion is hardly worth having. I would rather know one passionate than have a thousand without any passion...
    xoxo
    Jess

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  36. RimlyJune 2, 2011 at 2:32 AM

    I totally agree with you Jessica. xoxo

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  37. Monu AwallaJune 8, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    A beautiful way to describe a Kiss.. It was gentle & passionate in the ways the moves progressed.. Lovely..

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  38. RimlyJune 9, 2011 at 10:16 PM

    Thank you Monu for commenting :)

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