Saturday, June 11, 2011

Timelessness....a collaboration

We were strangers till a year ago and then we met in Ladies Club, Alpana and I. What followed was an amazing friendship, sharing our thoughts, some happy ones some painful. We had been planning to meet someday but never really got down to actually put it into action till one day Alpana called me. She was upset about something and as we talked on an impulse I asked her to come and spend some time with me and it was decided. When we finally met it was as if we had known each other for years, we felt so at home with each other. Every day we talked till the wee hours of the morning. It was then we thought of writing something together for all our blogger friends. Both being die hard romantics we decided to write about love and passion. This collaboration is for all of you...

Timelessness....a collaboration 

I had given up hope on my love, my lover. Till one day, the unexpected happened. He came back, after all these years, my love, for which I had always yearned for. We both discovered that nothing had changed between us, the love, passion we felt for each other was stronger than before. Holding hands, we walked along a familiar path, the silence of the night speaking for us.  The fresh air filling our senses, I am subdued by just being near you. Stimulated emotions, I can hardly bear, while you hold me firmly but sincerely…a silent promise.

In the darkness of the night with only the glow of the moon illuminating our bodies, I feel the warmth of your hand as it covers mine, your moist warm breath on my neck, a finger tracing my cheek, my body tingling with every touch. Uncontrollably I reach for you, aching for your touch, your every move, wanting you to ravish me with your mouth; with uninhibited passion you trace your tongue over my lips gently probing, as it enters my mouth…I kiss you with all my passion and feel your hands move over my body. Straining towards you, I feel your passion for me. Your hands tenderly caress me, exploring every inch of my body, tracing my bare breast with your fingertips…your hand enclosing it.  Slowly lowering your mouth, you kiss with a gentle tenderness, your voyage continues as you cross my navel. You ultimately reach your destination and its untainted bliss. I tilt back my head in sheer ecstasy, sweet pleasure ripping through my body. Fire burning within us, I need you to fill me with yourself. Together, we probe the depths to which we have longed for, giving of ourselves unselfishly, and accepting what the other is offering with openness and trust. We feel the fire ignite as the touching and caressing gain fervor and our bodies ride the waves in unison. With urgency we increase the rhythm of our love song. You fill me with your entire being until we explode together with contented exhaustion. Holding you as you take me to the sacred place you promised just moments before…proving to me all over again, that you are the air through which I breathe and move, you are within me, my body fevered and bruised with your kisses. You are my love, my dream, my warmth, and all that I ever wanted. It was then I realized that I was home again.

                                                                                                       Alpana Jaiswal

His lips trail
A blaze of fire
Along her contours…
A moan of pleasure
Escape from her
Hungry lips
Into the night breeze
The fire crackles
Coming alive
Its glowing ember
Shimmers on their
Intertwined limbs…
It is as if time
Has become timeless
Nothing has changed
Like the dark canopy
Of twinkling stars,
The ancient trees
With their many secrets
As they gently
Whisper in her ears,
The watery moon
As it looks down upon them,
Her lover of so many
Seasons before
Is ageless…
Surrendering to him
She unfurls in her
Seeking, searching
Her lips wanting more…
As his full mouth
Descends on her
Pink, taut nipples
She gasps in pleasure
Her soft supple body
Arches towards him
In her desire to be taken…
He gazes into her
Fiery eyes, her passion
Burning into him
In them he sees
Her undying love
Holding back no more
He unleashes his passion
As he gently takes her
In all her glory…
The gentle whispering
Trees dance in frenzy,
The twinkling stars
Burn brighter
While the moon smiles
As they celebrate
This reunion of two souls…
With every rhythm
Every thrust
As passion rides
Glimpses of eternity
Flashes across their
Inner being…
Past, present, future
All barriers broken
They cry in unison
As they reach their crescendo
Spent and sated
They lie fused as one
Nothing has changed
Their love remains ageless…

                                                                                            Rimly Bezbaruah  


  1. What a wonderful collaboration of friendship, a perfect fit like hand and glove oxox

  2. Oh Ladies,, please! A love that never dies is one where you enjoy each other mentally and carnally..

    ooh I need some loving!!!


  3. This is no shock.. Two great poetess'. two great friends and two great women collaborating to bring us a story of never ending love both told in their own style and words but intertwining just like the limbs of the lovers in their poems.... Excellent and you needed to live up to two great poetess....yourselves and you did yourselves proud

  4. I thought this was mental and carnal A :))) Wishing you lots of loving. Thank you.

  5. Jim I hope we did it justice. We were up late last night writing. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment

  6. WoWzA! Pretty early in the morning and I wasn't ready for this! I might have to go wake up my boyfriend now...

  7. When Alpana told me about your collaboration this morning... I thought wow, this will be a explosion... of passion, talent and REAL emotions...I was awakened by the first lines of Alpana and was like reaching a boiling point at Rimly's conclusion... You do have ways for blood pressure rise. Could I use this for my patients too?

    Loved it soul sis. This is SO TRUE!

  8. Two passionate beings exploding into a lush and lusty combination of true feeling. I love both of you ladies. Soulful and sultry. Amazing!

  9. Ha,ha,ha, Linda I am glad we got that kind of a response from you. Cheers to love and passion. Thank you for commenting

  10. Melissa I am glad your blood pressure is going high. It was intended to do just that. :)))

  11. Tameka it is an honor getting a comment like this from a poet like you. Thanks a ton

  12. Home is where I wish to be!! Passion and love are what all humans desire and the lovely words from two great writers make us crave it all the more. Two kindred spirits forged from the same source of love...Great post!!!

  13. Can't live without PASSION!!! I love this, very beautiful indeed. Thank you for sharing.

  14. Hope we can meet some day too - Amazing collaboration - what a combo!!! Ladies Club zindabaad!

  15. Hello Rimly & Alpana -

    Ladies ladies, whoaaaa. This is the first read of my Saturday morning for me. Rimly, I tried to bribe Alpana to clue me in on this fabulous piece of passionate artwork. She wouldn't budge and made me wait until the unveiling today. LOL, smart and glad she didn't tell me. I love this. WOW, you girls are too hot. Thank you. :)

  16. I already got the feeling on previous night that something soul reviving is going to happen as soon as Alps informed me about both of yours mind merging.. The result is now in front of all.. You & Alps truly created magic.. Hats off..hats off.. :)

  17. Rimly and Alpana,

    My breath was taken away. My body in a heated frenzy. Timeless love, and devotion that burns within the depths of two peoples souls.
    When I close my eyes I see the lovers embraced for all eternity.


  18. Alpana and Rimly...this is a union of Passion of the write like the Two Eagles, soaring together...yet linked in mind, doing the Dance..each knowing where the other is at all times. I hope we see more of truly is inspiring. The essence of the hint of a voice whispering in your ear...through the words is tangible...

  19. Thank you Farfalla passion keeps all of us going. Thank you for commenting

  20. Kriti seriously lets meet up soon and all of us collaborate something together

  21. Hey Charlie we promised it will be hot and it sure looks like it from you comment. Thank you

  22. Thanks Monu, we hoped to move everyone with this collaboration

  23. Hey Jessica knew you would love this. Just our kind of passion and frenzy. xoxo

  24. Thank you Ravenmyth to be compared to the eagle is something very special

  25. Hi Rimly, I left a comment on Alpana´s blog also. I knew this collaboration would not disappoint and it didn´t! You ladies are smoking hot!

  26. Thanks Nelieta we are so glad we could do something like this together. It was a sincere attempt at being smoking hot!!!:)

  27. You both make a match made in heaven. Two unbelievably gifted people that your collaboration brings passion flooding from your words

  28. I loved this most.........! :)

    "We both discovered that nothing had changed between us, the love, passion we felt for each other was stronger than before."

    "Past, present, future
    All barriers broken
    They cry in unison"

  29. I'm speechless!
    Loved it..your words are reflecting of your heart.
    Love you Alps, Rimly both are so talented!

  30. A refreshing look at love, Nice read:)

    I'm coming back :)

  31. you and i, in this beautiful world, one in mind, body and soul..........excellent poem rimly, you rock!!!

  32. Larry thank you so much. We so enjoyed writing together because we are so alike in many ways.

  33. Mohinee thank you for visiting and liking our collaboration.

  34. @Simran thank you sweetheart. I know you would like it because you too speak from the heart
    @Rachit I am honored that you have visited my blog and intend to come back. Thank you
    @Sancheeta thank you sweetheart

  35. Rimly and Alpana, putting you two together in the same space has produced an incredible work of art! You two should be patting yourself on the back for your creation. It is beautiful! Great job :)
    Oh, and it's nice to hear that you two were able to meet up and share. I know what you mean when you say that you feel as tho you have known each other for years. Bonnie recently visited on her way to the beach. When she arrived, I felt as tho she was family. How strange that is, ya know?

  36. Passionate and breathless, heart pounding, and rich in all those sensations that make me weak at the knees. I wasn't ready to read this so early this morning but once I started, couldn't stop. Beautiful energy and testament to all that really matters ... yes, there is the day job and the mortgage, but without passions and fire, life is flat.

  37. Thank you Mary, it was wonderful meeting up. It is amazing how people connect. I am sure you had the same thing with Bonnie.

  38. So true Brenda, without passion and fire life is quite meaningless. Thank you

  39. I choose to remain single.. to remain my own lover... until such a time as there is a man who can ignite and fuel this type of passion within me!

  40. Great collaboration from two passionate women! It's no wonder you are friends, you share a vision!

  41. What passionate pieces! Also... How lovely that you got to spend some time together. :)

  42. Justice thank you for visiting and commenting. I hope you find someday soon someone who will ignite this passion in you. God bless.

  43. Sweepyjean it was great meeting up with Alpana. She is exactly what she writes about, full of passion, fire and love. We thoroughly enjoyed writing Timelessness. Thank you

  44. Yes Rachel it was great we got together, had some good time. Thank you

  45. wow....splendid...

    this is what happens when two genius get together.......its full of passion n energy by both of you.

    bets wishes,

  46. With the kind of talent and passion you have within you Rimly you will do justice to anything you want to express.As always excellent poem Rimly.Being in love throughout life is the best thing one can gift to oneself.
    When The Heart Speaks

  47. Yep, you girls are birds of a feather… hopeless romantics, all of you. Now, my advice is this – but only if you want to make A LOT of money, okay? Collaborate on a romance novel, come up with a good pseudonym, and publish it. I actually have three friends who did this. I forget what their pen name was, but they did write an entire novel. Nancy wrote the 1st chapter, Rebecca the 2nd, Katie the 3rd and they just kept rotating until the manuscript was done.

  48. same comments as I have mentioned on Alpana's - true love is really priceless and remains forever.

  49. Thank you Irfanuddin. We tried to bring as much passion into our posts

  50. Abhisek thank you so much. Your poems too are full of passion

  51. @Debra I know you have been telling me to publish. Let's see, maybe we will. Thank you so much
    @Nava.K thank you so much for visiting and commenting

  52. Alpana and Rimly , i guess that's what every woman secretly dreams of, it's a feeling of completeness unparalled...a small diff in approach Alpana you reach out and translate all the feelings , passions, while Rimly your man sees, feels your passion and takes you from there .... loved it :-)

  53. Frane thank you so much for your observant comment. Yes there is a different approach in both our writings.

  54. Great mix up by you two .. the way you two expressed was beautiful

  55. Thank you Sheril for visiting and commenting

  56. Wow!!! Sensual and erotic! I hope some day to see you two in print. What a beautiful, erotic book of poetry you two could produce. Pablo Neruda's work shrinks in comparison.

  57. Mari please dont put me to shame. Where is Pablo Neruda and where are we? But thank you for this beautiful comment. xoxo

  58. Rimly, I agree with Mari about you being better than Pablo Neruda. GO AND PUBLISH YOUR BOOK OF POETRY. Loved your collaboration and both of you have a distinct style of your own...

  59. Thank you for your comment Outlier.