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Tuesday, November 6, 2012

Sometimes I wish….


Sometimes I wish….

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Sometimes I wish
My mystical nights last forever…
The dark emblazoned by
The humming stars,
The clouds waltzing
To the tunes of the gentle breeze,
The night creatures
Silent spectators…
When we cross over
Fusing as one
On the milky- way,
Stringing our dreams
With silver threads
Borrowed from the moon,
Etching colorful patterns
From pieces of sparkling stars
While the soothing wind
Sells our dreams
To the glowing darkness…
Guardians of our secret.
We dance and play
On the divine path
Fingers intertwined
Like children,
Happy and gleeful…
Oblivious to the cold truth
The inevitable dawn
Heralds…
The magical night fades
To resurrect once more
Waiting, holding its breath…
How I wish the night was
Mine to keep…

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68 comments:

  1. Stranger in a Strange LandNovember 6, 2012 at 2:27 AM

    Well done, dear.

    Kindest & warmest regards,
    Mike

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  2. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 2:28 AM

    Hey Mike, great to see you here and commenting.Thanks a ton!

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  3. Vijay ShenoyNovember 6, 2012 at 3:49 AM

    "Stringing our dreams, With silver threads, Borrowed from the moon."

    Beautiful words... glad to read a refreshing poetry... Cheers

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 3:51 AM

      Thank you so much Vijay. One of my older poems. :)

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    2. Vijay ShenoyNovember 6, 2012 at 4:11 AM

      Ah! I c... I thought you have began to pen again... hmmm... still awaiting :)

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    3. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 7:42 AM

      I will start, I just have to be in the right mood :)

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  4. AnonymousNovember 6, 2012 at 4:14 AM

    Thank you, dear Rimly, for this lovely poem for which i was waiting since long. Yes, how sad such romantic night has to give way to the harsh reality of the day!
    -Portia

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 7:36 AM

      Portia I always have you in my mind when I write poems like this. You keep waiting for me write. Thank you my friend for always pushing me to write.

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  5. JessicaNovember 6, 2012 at 4:44 AM

    I loved this! Yes, sometimes I do wish the night would last forever! The mysterious and glorious darkness so beautiful before dawn pierces it with light's blade, cutting deep through reverie...Beautiful poem!

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 7:39 AM

      Jessica, dreams of the night always has to come to an end when daylight pierces the fragile veil of fantasy and dreams. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your comment

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  6. Alpana JaiswalNovember 6, 2012 at 4:57 AM

    Dreams are today's answers to tomorrow's questions.
    - Edgar Cayce
    Great to see you writing Rimly,beautiful words as always.The dreams you choose to believe in come to be.When you feel in your innermost being that you will achieve what you set out to do,you open the way for miracles.

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 7:44 AM

      Thank you my soul sis. Miracles I have to believe in, I have no choice till then it is one day at a time

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  7. sulekkhaNovember 6, 2012 at 7:18 AM

    I love your romantic poem, Outlier. It makes my heart sing.

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 7:45 AM

      I love your romantic poems too, Outlier. And I so identify with them, your love poems

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  8. SimranNovember 6, 2012 at 8:39 AM

    Delighted I feel after reading you, Rimly :)

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  9. David WriterNovember 6, 2012 at 9:25 AM

    Beautiful imagery!

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 9:33 AM

      Thank you so much David for visiting and commenting

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  10. Galen PearlNovember 6, 2012 at 11:07 AM

    Vivid and beautiful. Thank you for bringing beauty to the world through your poetry.

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 1:20 PM

      Thank you so much Galen for your beautiful comment

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  11. DebraNovember 6, 2012 at 1:24 PM

    How lyrical and musical! I can almost hear you singing.

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  12. Privy TriflesNovember 6, 2012 at 9:50 PM

    Beautiful.....loved the last line - Wish the night was mine to keep!

    I sometimes wish that as I simply don't want this magic to end..the quietness around me, the peaceful atmosphere...oh I so love it!

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    1. RimlyNovember 6, 2012 at 10:58 PM

      Thank you so much for your wonderful comment

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  13. Dangerous LindaNovember 7, 2012 at 3:16 AM

    beautiful and sort of heart-wrenching. bittersweet. thank you for sharing your, rimly. xoxo

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    1. RimlyNovember 7, 2012 at 3:36 AM

      Thank you so much Linda for visiting and commenting

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  14. Corinne RodriguesNovember 7, 2012 at 5:12 AM

    Alas, we have to wake up don't we? :) But the good thing is that we can create our own 'reality'. Sometimes I wish you'd publish these poems. :)♥

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    1. RimlyNovember 7, 2012 at 6:40 AM

      Thank you Corinne. Yes we have to wake up but we can still dream with our imagination. I dont know if your wish will come true or whether I will make a conscious effort to publish but as long as I have friends like you to read and appreciate them, it is good enough for me.

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  15. Nikky44November 7, 2012 at 7:40 PM

    great poem Rimly. I've missed you!

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    1. RimlyNovember 8, 2012 at 1:53 AM

      Dear Nikky, I have really not been around. I am sure I have missed reading some of your posts too. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.

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  16. brendaNovember 7, 2012 at 10:05 PM

    You always remind me why I am a hopeless romantic. You put me to shame, Lyrical, passionate, evocative, and rich, as always.

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    1. RimlyNovember 8, 2012 at 2:10 AM

      LOL! Brenda you can never be put to shame with your passion and romantic nature! Thank you so much for reading and commenting

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  17. Melissa TandocNovember 8, 2012 at 4:18 AM

    I so love what you have written. I feel it deeply connected with me. The image reminds me of figurines in a music box ~ the lyrics are coming from your poetry...

    Lovelots soul sis...I'm always happy to read what you write.

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    1. RimlyNovember 8, 2012 at 5:44 AM

      Thank you soul sis. I always wait to read what you have to say about my poetry, it will always warms my heart.

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  18. HardiNovember 8, 2012 at 11:11 PM

    Beautiful Rimly :)

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    1. RimlyNovember 8, 2012 at 11:59 PM

      Thank you Kiara. I wish I could email notification of your posts.

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  19. AnonymousNovember 8, 2012 at 11:53 PM

    very nicely written. lovely poetic post. enjoyed going through it !

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    1. RimlyNovember 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM

      Thank you roseandcoffee for visiting and leaving a lovely comment

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  20. NelietaNovember 9, 2012 at 1:47 AM

    This is beautiful Rimly especially the last part:
    The magical night fades
    To resurrect once more
    Waiting, holding its breath…
    How I wish the night was
    Mine to keep…
    I really like it!

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  21. Rachel HoytNovember 9, 2012 at 6:44 AM

    Rimly, you write my romantic thoughts much more beautifully than I could. I can totally relate to this. I have one whom I dream of still. :)

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    1. RimlyNovember 9, 2012 at 6:55 AM

      I hope this person who you dream of still brings you happiness like mine, Rachel. Thank you so much, my romantic friend

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  22. Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comNovember 9, 2012 at 8:20 AM

    How nice it would be to go back to a wonderful time in our life and we could just stay suspended in time :) Unfortunately, that is not an option...but we can still dream...can't we?

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    1. RimlyNovember 9, 2012 at 8:30 AM

      Yes we can still dream, Mary. Thank you so much

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  23. kukaNovember 9, 2012 at 10:46 AM

    The night needs to be mine

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  24. kukaNovember 9, 2012 at 10:49 AM

    my bed should be my solace....... How I wish the night was
    Mine to keep…

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    1. RimlyNovember 9, 2012 at 11:20 AM

      Its a pleasure to see you here, David. Thank you

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  25. TamekaNovember 9, 2012 at 6:20 PM

    Rimly,so many thoughts come to mind when I read this. Lovers enjoying intimate time, a sleepy maiden happily dreaming about her beloved, a writer deeply in love with her pen. So many notions to conjure. Beautifully written. :-)

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    1. RimlyNovember 9, 2012 at 10:30 PM

      Tameka, glad to know you enjoyed this poem.Yes, it does conjure up a few thoughts. Thank you so much for your comment.

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  26. Martha Jane OrlandoNovember 10, 2012 at 3:56 AM

    Absolutely stunning, Rimly! Your words intertwined with my heart as I read this. May your writing ever hold this touch of magic . . .
    Blessings!

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    1. RimlyNovember 10, 2012 at 9:23 AM

      I hope I can continue to do that Martha, write from the core of my heart. Thank you so much, my friend

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  27. BellaNovember 18, 2012 at 7:26 AM

    Rimly, just like the name of your blog, your lovely poetry seems to take us on a magical journey; one filled with romance and the unexpected thrill of the forbidden. I'm transported to times when love meant passion, stolen moments and joy! And when you thrown in secrecy, the encouter become all that more scintillating, lady! I loved this piece! :)

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    1. RimlyNovember 18, 2012 at 10:56 PM

      Thank you Bella for leaving such a wonderful comment on my poem. I am glad that I could take you to this journey of magical moment

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  28. JerlyNovember 19, 2012 at 7:52 PM

    Beutiful! the truth is ofcourse that nothing lasts for ever. It is always better to accept this. What I always prefer to think on the other hand is''''"At least it was there for sometime and I enjoyed that time"

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    1. RimlyNovember 19, 2012 at 11:24 PM

      I so agree with you Jerly. Something is better than nothing. Thank you for visiting and commenting

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  29. Poet DeshNovember 23, 2012 at 3:05 AM

    Dear Rimly Bezbarua,
    at the outset, let me thank you for opening the door of the world of your beautiful poems to me.Your poem has been rightly appreciated by so many before me. To add my humble words I'd say,well,why do you say,'How I wish the night was/Mine to keep..' when you have crystallized it in this poem?
    -POET DESH

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    1. RimlyNovember 23, 2012 at 3:35 AM

      Thank you Poet Desh for appreciating my post. Yes I have put it into writing but there are things we still wish for. That's what this poem is about

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  30. UnknownNovember 23, 2012 at 10:31 AM

    Wonderful! Great writings! I've shared it with my friends on a page i have on facebook dedicated to authors, and where you are more than welcome to join and post on its wall your writings. i'll share them too, for all to see! <3

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    1. RimlyNovember 23, 2012 at 10:39 PM

      Thank you so much Irina for visiting "Journey". Please give me the link to your face book page.

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  31. AdrieneNovember 24, 2012 at 2:18 PM

    Just gorgeous, Rimly. Who wouldn't wish this night to glow forever? <3

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  32. ArcaneDecember 8, 2012 at 11:27 PM

    Beautiful lines, captured me and the pic is one of my fav :)

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    1. RimlyDecember 9, 2012 at 3:06 AM

      Thank you so much Arcane for visiting and reading

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  33. Deepak KripalDecember 12, 2012 at 3:26 PM

    You are so good with words.. your wish is indeed beautiful..

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  34. UnknownFebruary 1, 2013 at 3:19 AM

    You leave me speechless

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  35. RimlyFebruary 1, 2013 at 3:22 AM

    Thank you Fiona

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