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Saturday, January 14, 2012

Your Voice


Your Voice

Why do I love you
The way I do?
That all I need is
Your voice…
Deep and tender,
A soft murmur
In the silken darkness
As it soothes my
Weary soul
To come alive again...
To a renewed hope,
A crazy desire to love,
To bask in its
Glorious warmth...  
    There are days
When all I do
Is listen to that
Deep timbre tone
As it gently stirs me
While the words
That pour from you,
A hum in the night…
Only your voice
Across impossible miles
Tingles in my ears
As emotions overwhelm my senses…
Safe, 
Willing to dream
Once again,
To live in our fantasy…
And I close my eyes
 Falling in love with you
All over again…





57 comments:

  1. Bingo! so beautiful...am sharing this.

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  2. Thank you so much, my friend.

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  3. love does it all, again and again.

    fantastic!! so poetic in its own sense. just flowing smooth in the river of love.

    you always put your soul with full dedication in each of your creation, Rimly. i just love the way.

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  4. Astoundingly romantic, Rimly! Just adored this poem. :)
    Blessings!

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  5. The timbre of his voice across a million miles is nectar to the ears. Sometimes the sound of his voice is the only thing you need, to hear his heartbeats.The joy you experience sends shivers down your spine. Lovely poem of pure, long distance sweet love between two lonely but fulfilled people.
    You are a talented poetess my dear friend, keep writing...take care

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  6. Thank you my soul sis Sancheeta. You are right I can only write when my souls feels.

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  7. Thank you my romantic friend Martha!

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  8. Indeje David I am glad this poem inspires you to renew your love life. Thank you for commenting

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  9. Oooo...hmmm I could imagine it the way you wrote it. And I would fall in love too all over again...hearing his voice...

    Loved it Rimly soul sis :*

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  10. You summed it all Outlier. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment

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  11. LOL! Melissa my soul sis nothing like falling in love all over again! Thank you my friend for enjoying this poem

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  12. When in love, really every day is the day to fall in love with your lover!Very sweeeeeet poem!
    -ELLE

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  13. Yes Elle to be able to fall in love everyday is blissful! Thank you my friend for your sweet comment

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  14. Hello Rimly.
    Being a man of love & romance, this poem is pure sweetness to me. The timbre of your words intoxicates my soul and is the reason why I keep coming back here to be filled (smile).
    This is the magical power of love...its voice cannot be stilled.
    Beautifully expressed & you have lovely images too.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  15. Andy, what a lovely comment from you! Coming from a roamntic poet like you, it is an honor! Thank you so much

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    1. Rimly, love is the power that joins us together & keeps us connected through beautiful poetry like this.
      Thank YOU!

      Don't you just love these threaded comments where we can respond directly to each other? (smile)

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    2. I agree with you Andy. Thank you so much for visiting and leaving such lovely comments

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  16. Just Beautiful!
    Poured with a true love feeling! :)
    I'm loving it!

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  17. Thank you Simran. Yes I did that, with true feelings.

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  18. You poets are turning me all whichways, I loved this and I love the way you put the words to paper. Apparently the ice around my heart is melting because I get all mushy inside when I read your wonderfully romantic words.

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  19. Your words remind me why I am a hopeless romantic. I am. Even if it i never succeed at it or am always bumbling or clumsy, I know it exists. You've the master of evoking passionate moments not the blogosphere. Lovely, as ever, my dear Rimly.

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  20. Like like:))
    Rimjhim

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  21. It's so beautiful to read your words.....I am not in love myself...but with your words I can see it......it's a beautiful sight....As always...XOXOXOXO

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  22. There are days
    When all I do
    Is listen to that
    Deep timbre tone
    As it gently stirs me....

    Rimly, you outdid yourself here! ♥

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  23. I know how this poem was born..and I hope and pray such poems are always written by you..Forever is not a word...rather a place where two lovers go when true love takes them there.To translate love into words, is an impossible task, cause you'll know love when you hear it, it all depends on who you are with.
    Loving a person is loving everything but the person. Being in love with that person is loving everything and that person.
    I loved this one Rimly..waiting to read more..."THE AFTER EFFECTS"..

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  24. Jan your comment really got me mushy too. Thank you so much for this beautiful one of my poem

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  25. Brenda, romantics we sure are and like you I guess I have bumbled and been clumsy. That's why this reason to write about imaginary romance. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment

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  26. Thank you my dear Bongo for your lovely comment.

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  27. Corinne thank you so much. It was one of those spur of the moment poems

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  28. Alpana I dont know if there will be any "After Effects". This just happened by chance. But thank you so much for your lovely comment, soul sis

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  29. Oh such a beautiful expression of love - don't we tend to fall in love over and over again when the loved ones do that? Amazingly touching poem. :)

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    1. Thank you Punam. Sometimes you dont even need to see the person, you are in love with his voice alone.

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  30. Nice poem.......

    Love Love Love.....

    Nothing is true other than love.....

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    1. Thank you Harshal. Yes nothing like love!

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  31. Beautiful Rimly !!

    Ayon

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    1. Thank you Ayon for visiting and commenting

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    1. Thank you FherYmas for visiting and commenting

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  33. Another lovely poetry by you. :) The expression of "Once again" was too good. :)

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    1. Thank you Anshul for your lovly comment

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  34. Sigh!!! Such beautiful words....the poem made me fall in love with love all over again.... :)

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    1. Swati great to always read your comments. Glad you liked the poem

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  35. That's so sweet...Love, it's a beautiful thing..a shelter for our hearts.

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    1. Yes Jessica love is a beautiful thing. Thank you for your comment

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  36. Your words make me want to fall in love, Rimly! So beautiful! :-)

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    1. Thank you Irene. Nothing like falling in love, It is magical!

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  37. Lovely poem, there is so much depth in the words...

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    1. Santa thank you so much for visiting Journey and commenting. Really appreciate it.

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  38. Lovely poem and picture to go with it

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    1. Rahul great to see you visit Journey again. Thank you for your comment

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  39. Sweet Rimly, your words create stirring emotions. Poetry is you calling and love is your muse.

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    1. Leah your comments always encourage me so much. Thank you dear friend.

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  40. This IS beautiful. It reminds me of the scripture... "I sleep but my heart is awake, it is the voice of my beloved."

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  41. What a lovely line from the scriptures Lisa. Honored that this poem reminds you of the scriptures. Thank you so much

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  42. Such beautiful writing, Rimly! Loved it! :-)

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    1. Thank you for visiting Journey Princess Fiona. Hope to see you here more often.

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