Your Voice
The way I do?
That all I need is
Your voice…
Deep and tender,
A soft murmur
In the silken darkness
As it soothes my
Weary soul
To come alive again...
To a renewed hope,
A crazy desire to love,
To bask in its
Glorious warmth...
There are days
When all I do
Is listen to that
Deep timbre tone
As it gently stirs me
While the words
That pour from you,
A hum in the night…
Only your voice
Across impossible miles
Tingles in my ears
As emotions overwhelm my senses…
Safe,
Willing to dream
Willing to dream
Once again,
To live in our fantasy…
And I close my eyes
Falling in love with you
All over again…
Bingo! so beautiful...am sharing this.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, my friend.
ReplyDeletelove does it all, again and again.
ReplyDeletefantastic!! so poetic in its own sense. just flowing smooth in the river of love.
you always put your soul with full dedication in each of your creation, Rimly. i just love the way.
Astoundingly romantic, Rimly! Just adored this poem. :)
ReplyDeleteBlessings!
inspires and renews my love life
ReplyDeleteThe timbre of his voice across a million miles is nectar to the ears. Sometimes the sound of his voice is the only thing you need, to hear his heartbeats.The joy you experience sends shivers down your spine. Lovely poem of pure, long distance sweet love between two lonely but fulfilled people.
ReplyDeleteYou are a talented poetess my dear friend, keep writing...take care
Thank you my soul sis Sancheeta. You are right I can only write when my souls feels.
ReplyDeleteThank you my romantic friend Martha!
ReplyDeleteIndeje David I am glad this poem inspires you to renew your love life. Thank you for commenting
ReplyDeleteOooo...hmmm I could imagine it the way you wrote it. And I would fall in love too all over again...hearing his voice...
ReplyDeleteLoved it Rimly soul sis :*
You summed it all Outlier. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment
ReplyDeleteLOL! Melissa my soul sis nothing like falling in love all over again! Thank you my friend for enjoying this poem
ReplyDeleteWhen in love, really every day is the day to fall in love with your lover!Very sweeeeeet poem!
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Yes Elle to be able to fall in love everyday is blissful! Thank you my friend for your sweet comment
ReplyDeleteHello Rimly.
ReplyDeleteBeing a man of love & romance, this poem is pure sweetness to me. The timbre of your words intoxicates my soul and is the reason why I keep coming back here to be filled (smile).
This is the magical power of love...its voice cannot be stilled.
Beautifully expressed & you have lovely images too.
Thanks for sharing.
Andy, what a lovely comment from you! Coming from a roamntic poet like you, it is an honor! Thank you so much
ReplyDeleteRimly, love is the power that joins us together & keeps us connected through beautiful poetry like this.
DeleteThank YOU!
Don't you just love these threaded comments where we can respond directly to each other? (smile)
I agree with you Andy. Thank you so much for visiting and leaving such lovely comments
DeleteJust Beautiful!
ReplyDeletePoured with a true love feeling! :)
I'm loving it!
Thank you Simran. Yes I did that, with true feelings.
ReplyDeleteYou poets are turning me all whichways, I loved this and I love the way you put the words to paper. Apparently the ice around my heart is melting because I get all mushy inside when I read your wonderfully romantic words.
ReplyDeleteYour words remind me why I am a hopeless romantic. I am. Even if it i never succeed at it or am always bumbling or clumsy, I know it exists. You've the master of evoking passionate moments not the blogosphere. Lovely, as ever, my dear Rimly.
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It's so beautiful to read your words.....I am not in love myself...but with your words I can see it......it's a beautiful sight....As always...XOXOXOXO
ReplyDeleteThere are days
ReplyDeleteWhen all I do
Is listen to that
Deep timbre tone
As it gently stirs me....
Rimly, you outdid yourself here! ♥
I know how this poem was born..and I hope and pray such poems are always written by you..Forever is not a word...rather a place where two lovers go when true love takes them there.To translate love into words, is an impossible task, cause you'll know love when you hear it, it all depends on who you are with.
ReplyDeleteLoving a person is loving everything but the person. Being in love with that person is loving everything and that person.
I loved this one Rimly..waiting to read more..."THE AFTER EFFECTS"..
Jan your comment really got me mushy too. Thank you so much for this beautiful one of my poem
ReplyDeleteBrenda, romantics we sure are and like you I guess I have bumbled and been clumsy. That's why this reason to write about imaginary romance. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment
ReplyDeleteThank you my dear Bongo for your lovely comment.
ReplyDeleteCorinne thank you so much. It was one of those spur of the moment poems
ReplyDeleteAlpana I dont know if there will be any "After Effects". This just happened by chance. But thank you so much for your lovely comment, soul sis
ReplyDeleteNice poem.......
ReplyDeleteLove Love Love.....
Nothing is true other than love.....
Thank you Harshal. Yes nothing like love!
DeleteBeautiful Rimly !!
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Thank you Ayon for visiting and commenting
DeleteVery positive and passionate.
ReplyDeleteThank you FherYmas for visiting and commenting
DeleteThank you Punam. Sometimes you dont even need to see the person, you are in love with his voice alone.
ReplyDeleteAnother lovely poetry by you. :) The expression of "Once again" was too good. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Anshul for your lovly comment
DeleteSigh!!! Such beautiful words....the poem made me fall in love with love all over again.... :)
ReplyDeleteSwati great to always read your comments. Glad you liked the poem
DeleteThat's so sweet...Love, it's a beautiful thing..a shelter for our hearts.
ReplyDeleteYes Jessica love is a beautiful thing. Thank you for your comment
DeleteYour words make me want to fall in love, Rimly! So beautiful! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Irene. Nothing like falling in love, It is magical!
DeleteLovely poem, there is so much depth in the words...
ReplyDeleteSanta thank you so much for visiting Journey and commenting. Really appreciate it.
DeleteLovely poem and picture to go with it
ReplyDeleteRahul great to see you visit Journey again. Thank you for your comment
DeleteSweet Rimly, your words create stirring emotions. Poetry is you calling and love is your muse.
ReplyDeleteLeah your comments always encourage me so much. Thank you dear friend.
DeleteThis IS beautiful. It reminds me of the scripture... "I sleep but my heart is awake, it is the voice of my beloved."
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely line from the scriptures Lisa. Honored that this poem reminds you of the scriptures. Thank you so much
ReplyDeleteSuch beautiful writing, Rimly! Loved it! :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting Journey Princess Fiona. Hope to see you here more often.
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