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Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Is This Love?


Is This Love?



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She sighs, she purrs
A sated proud feline…
As she lay languid
And regal,
A diva in full glory…
A tremulous smile
Plays on her full lips
As his gentle fingers
Strum and transform
Every scar, every ugly memory
Into a thing of beauty
To behold!
His hungry lips explore
Her undulating contours
Unraveling her mystery
As she surrenders…
She sighs, she purrs
The outside din
A symphony to her ears
His whispers of love
Burning and sizzling
As she twirls and glides
To their fiery passion
The walls that caved once
Now tell tales of opulence
She is a queen…
Her heart flutters
Like wings,
Ready to soar to
The deep unknown
As it traverses realms
To be one with him…
She sighs, she purrs
And wonders…
Is this love?




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47 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2012 at 1:57 AM

    Yeah, It certainly is! Wow!! Waht a fab.poem!
    MWAH!!
    -Portia

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  2. JANUSeptember 11, 2012 at 2:04 AM

    Oh yeah, it is. Loved this Rimly.

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  3. JANUSeptember 11, 2012 at 2:05 AM

    Loved this Rimly.

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  4. Vijay ShenoySeptember 11, 2012 at 3:13 AM

    Fantastic... loved it... :)

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  5. Corinne RodriguesSeptember 11, 2012 at 3:32 AM

    Sensuous is not the word and yet it's not just lust ...it's love..
    As his gentle fingers
    Strum and transform
    Every scar, every ugly memory
    Into a thing of beauty
    To behold!
    Beautiful, dear Rimly!

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    1. RimlySeptember 12, 2012 at 7:26 AM

      This was one of those poems when I could not sleep. I wrote this at 3 in the morning. Thank you,my friend for all the words of encouragement

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  6. Alpana JaiswalSeptember 11, 2012 at 7:27 AM

    WOW!!!!!!!!!! Love at its best,I love it Rimly,no one can write so passionately as you do. I can feel every word here..."Sometimes your nearness takes my breath away; and all the things I want to say can find no voice. Then, in silence, I can only hope my eyes will speak my heart."......<3 <3 <3

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    1. RimlySeptember 12, 2012 at 7:49 AM

      Thank you Alpana. Miss reading your poetry. Do write.

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  7. JANUSeptember 11, 2012 at 9:58 AM

    A token of appreciation for you -
    http://janukulkarni.blogspot.in/2012/09/cool-enough-to-grab-award.html

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  8. NelietaSeptember 11, 2012 at 10:53 AM

    I love this Rimly! It made me think about a song from Alison Moyet back in the 80`s...is this love? I loved that song! Beautiful poem!

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    1. RimlySeptember 12, 2012 at 8:17 AM

      I must listen to this song. Nelieta. Thank you so much

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  9. Martha Jane OrlandoSeptember 11, 2012 at 1:39 PM

    This is too hot to handle! Just wow, Rimly!
    Blessings!

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 11, 2012 at 1:49 PM

    Commenting after ages, sis. As always, beautiful poetry. It is about love but it is also about hope and optimism.

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    1. RimlySeptember 12, 2012 at 8:20 AM

      Great to see you here sis. Thank you so much for visiting

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  11. BellaSeptember 11, 2012 at 4:19 PM

    Rimly, I am purring like a cat as I read this poem! What a fantastic piece! Surely you have once again successfully involved all the senses and given us imagery that keeps us holding our breath! Not only is the passion present, but also the unconditional acceptance of the beloved, past scars included. Most definitely, methinks this qualifies for love! :)

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    1. RimlySeptember 12, 2012 at 8:21 AM

      Thank you for thinking this qualifies for love, Bella. Love your comments. Thank you, my friend

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  12. The PoetSeptember 11, 2012 at 7:40 PM

    Dear Rimly,
    When given freely from one heart to the other, love is a beautiful feeling that can restore all hope and renew one's spirit...I know because it's what I stand for and live by. I always wish the same for you. Nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

    The Idealists Of The World

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    1. RimlySeptember 12, 2012 at 8:22 AM

      Yes Andy, I agree. and you are just the person who will know this with your beautiful and romantic poetry. Thank you

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  13. sulekkhaSeptember 11, 2012 at 8:11 PM

    Yes it is Love and your words are lovey.

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  14. Rigzin NamgyalSeptember 12, 2012 at 12:31 AM

    ..it indeed is love..beautiful piece of writing.. :)

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  15. RimlySeptember 12, 2012 at 7:50 AM

    Thank you Punam, great to see you here

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  16. brendaSeptember 14, 2012 at 8:20 AM

    Rimly, love is one of my two favorite topics to explore (writing is the other one). I know I've come close, but sometimes I wonder if I truly know what love is.. on family love, I am certain, but with a partners. I think yes, then no, then... I don't know. I think this is why there are so my poems on the subject.

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    1. RimlySeptember 15, 2012 at 12:31 AM

      I agree Brenda. Family love is easier to understand because we have family for a lifetime whereas love with partners can change. Thank you so much for your insight into this.

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  17. Rachel HoytSeptember 15, 2012 at 9:16 AM

    Where there is purring, there is love. :) Beautiful poem!

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  18. HardiSeptember 16, 2012 at 2:58 PM

    Dear Rimly


    You've been awarded the Versatile Blogger award, click the link for more details.

    http://a-shared-thought.blogspot.ca/2012/09/the-versatile-blogger-award.html

    Congrats!

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    1. RimlySeptember 16, 2012 at 11:53 PM

      Dear Kiara,
      Thank you so much. I am truly honored

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  19. snehaSeptember 17, 2012 at 6:37 AM

    sexy!!!!!!!!! :)

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  20. IreneSeptember 17, 2012 at 6:59 PM

    WOW... sensuality at its finest, Rimly! Great piece! <3 :-)

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  21. Farfalla Dreams ~ Lisa Marie FarfallaSeptember 18, 2012 at 1:23 PM

    BEAUTIFUL deeply lovely!!!

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  22. ClaudiaSeptember 20, 2012 at 9:15 PM

    nice....lots of comfort in the purring..so probably it is love..smiles

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    1. RimlySeptember 21, 2012 at 1:21 AM

      Thank you for visiting and commenting, Claudia

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  23. ParmitaNovember 17, 2012 at 6:55 AM

    Woah! Very passionate! You have ways to come up with such stirring poems. Great job Rimly!

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    1. RimlyNovember 18, 2012 at 11:00 PM

      Thank you so much, Sui. Great to see you here

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  24. Deepak KripalDecember 12, 2012 at 3:28 PM

    you have a great talent to create an imagery that is as good as real, if not better..

    mesmerising poem.. very romantic and passionate..

    use of words is impeccable.. kudos to you..

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    1. RimlyDecember 12, 2012 at 11:20 PM

      Hi Deepak, thank you for visiting Journey and reading my poems and leaving such beautiful comments.

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