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Thursday, November 24, 2011

My Love...



My love…


What is it about you my love?
That you come uninvited…
Filling my empty heart
Overwhelming my senses
When I searched not for you…

What is it about you my love?
That I want to break into
A dance, a song
A smile for everyone,
Thinking of you…

What is it about you my love?
That the colors and hues
Of my dreary world
Intensify to a riot,
Vibrant and intense…

What is it about you my love?
That I hold on to your hand
Never wanting to let go…
Wishing every moment
Never flitted away…

What is it about you my love?
That my desires and passion
Soar like an eagle
Reaching newer heights…
Exploring new dimensions in me

What is it about you my love?
That with renewed vigor
I embark on this journey
Of life, filled with strife
Without fear, without doubt…

What is it about you my dearest love?
That enwrapped in your arms
I feel rested and peaceful
At last…







78 comments:

  1. Rimly,Your poem raises questions which don't have any answers :) Love is an enigma, a magical experience and the most fulfilling emotion.We can just be in love and enjoy every moment, savor each day and live life happily.Loved your sweet and love-filled poem.

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  2. For a couple of weeks now I've been reading about love...being in love... what is love... Geez! I wish I could catch the fever and allow love to melt me that way...

    I've been reflecting about this over and it's so wonderful to feel loved...to 'feel rested'... secured and 'peaceful'...

    And I have to open my eyes to the many wonders this Lover brings :)

    I love this Rimly! I wish to read more of this from you :D

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  3. I am loving your posts now....they hv happiness...warm feeling of love n togetherness....aah i love ths line..wt s abt u my love....:)

    What is abt u my love....<3

    Love
    Mani

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  4. What is it about you, dear Rimly?
    That you pen such nice poems constantly?
    -PORTIA

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  5. Rimly: You describe love in ways that surprise and intrigue me. Love getting to know you through your lovely love poems ...

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  6. That love comes into our lives when we seek not... I seek not as I want what comes to me in full beauty....

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  7. Thank you dear Sulekha. Love is indeed an enigma.

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  8. I am in love with this one...When you fall in love, it is a temporary madness. It erupts like an earthquake, and then it subsides. And when it subsides, you have to make a decision. You have to work out whether your roots are become so entwined together that it is inconceivable that you should ever part. Because this is what love is. Love is not breathlessness, it is not excitement, it is not the desire to mate every second of the day. It is not lying awake at night imagining his kisses. For that is just being in love; which any of us can convince ourselves we are. Love itself is what is left over, when being in love has burned away...Yesterday, I thought I loved you as much as any one person could love another. Today, I found out that I was wrong and love you even more..Beautiful Rimly..Just as you are.

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  9. Melissa my soul sis, love will come to you when you least expect it and you will be swept off your feet then. Thank you

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  10. Yes Mani what is it about love....thank you for your comment

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  11. Thank you Portia for your lovely comment

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  12. Lovely to know you too Linda, through your writing. Thank you for your lovely comment

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  13. I agree with you Savira. Thank you for your comment

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  14. Alpana you are absolutely right. falling in love is something different from continuing to love someone after the euphoria is over. Thank you for your lovely comment

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  15. Why question it when you have such a magical person around? Just enjoy all the emotions that is bestowed upon you - loved being here as always : )

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  16. True love is beautiful as your words are ... As always....XOXOXOXOOX

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  17. Thank you `kriti. It's always a pleasure reading your comments

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  18. Thank you so much Bonnie. xoxo

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  19. Amazing you Rimly ..I always admire your writing :)

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  20. Only love can fill your heart with words that make you swirl and bring a smile to your face when all is silent, that and your writing Rimly :)

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  21. love is love which makes u do things u have never thought of doing.
    It takes u to a journey above everything and anything.
    It makes u feel secure and comfortable always and ever
    but still love is love nothing else
    Your blog are always so wonderful to read and then feel them.
    This was so nice to describe when u fall or be in love.
    thanks for posting

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  22. SJ thank you for your lovely comment. xoxo

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  23. Arti so great to see you here and commenting. Look forward to seeing you more often. Thank you for your wonderful comment

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  24. Hello.
    That's the beauty & magic of love...it creeps into your heart when you least expect it.
    Beautiful expressions Rimly.
    Thanks for sharing.

    A Sweet, Spanish Flower

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  25. Thank you Andy for your comment

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  26. Beautiful as usual....a happy poem at last! Loved it!

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  27. Yes a happy one at last! Thank you Swati

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  28. You write such beautiful love poems Rimly!

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  29. Once again, Rimly, you sweep me away! That's exactly how I felt when first falling in love with Danny. :)
    Blessings!

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  30. Falling in love is very different than the love that builds from there, you are so right. Both are such wonders. Beautiful poem.<3

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  31. Something sweet again from you Rimly.

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  32. do your dip your pin in honey to get these sweet lines? god bless rimly a Queen of hearts

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  33. Thank you so much Nelieta. I tried to write just a happy simple love poem.

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  34. Martha nothing like falling in love and being swept off your feet. Glad it brought back memories of you and Danny. Thank you so much

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  35. Thank you Jan. Falling in love and remaining in love are different from one another but both are love and what can be more beautiful than love

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  36. Yes Jim, something sweet in a long time. Thank you so much for visiting and commenting

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  37. LOL! Roy I tried to dip my pen in sweet syrupy honey instead of bitter gourd. Queen of hearts? That's an honor! Thank you my friend. God bless you

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  38. beautifuuly crafted.. its always a treat to read your poems :)

    Weakest LINK

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  39. Love - the manna all of us need in life.
    Love - that one elusive butterfly!

    :)
    Liked your poem
    ~Punam @ Dreamz Forever

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  40. Rimly it is the search of the heart that forever seeks..." What is it about you my Love"...I felt in this poem your journey into the understanding of "Your Love"...who are you, what are you, where do you take me? Will I recognize you? The loneliness within the search...will you lead me to the love I seek? The ups and downs along the way...yet empowered by Hope. The memory of the heights and euphoria of the soul, once found is forever embedded in your heart...craving to be felt and held again...in the other worldly embrace of Love's Arms...holding your heart within the dance. Never lost, only on the horizon, waiting to be found again...absolutley Beautiful...from the wisdom of a Heart well lived. My dear friend...Always..

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  41. A very passionate poem!

    That my desires and passion
    Soar like an eagle
    Reaching newer heights…
    Exploring new dimensions in me

    Lovely words!

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  42. Thank you Rachit. Good to see you here after a long time

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  43. Yes Punam, love is the manna we all need and yet it is so illusive. Thank you for reading and commenting

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  44. Thank you Rahul. Visitied your blogs. Enjoyed reading.

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  45. You explain it all so beautifully Ravenmyth. Yes we are all awaiting to be recognized by our loved ones. It is a journey of highs and lows but not without hope. Thank you always for such insightful comments. I really look forward to it.

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  46. Love can heal and empower like nothing else can! Wishing you loads of it, dearest Rimly.

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  47. Thank you so much Corrine. I hope your wishes come true. xoxo

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  48. loved Portia's comment. enjoyed this one a lot.

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  49. Love, a topic well travelled and one you write so well on. Funny the way we writers side up to a topic and make it our own. You've done just that.. breathless

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  50. Brenda lovely to see your comment. Thank you so much

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  51. :) excellent. very nice one.

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  52. Wishing every moment stay close to me... So as to read more and more from many writers. Loved this poetry. Your words shows the depth of your life. Will visit again.

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  53. so many questions go unanswered wen we think of love...yet it is always like love answers everythin for us in its own beautiful way...subtle and thoughtful....loved it...:)

    p.s.-What is it about you my love?
    That the colors and hues
    Of my dreary world
    Intensify to a riot,
    Vibrant and intense…awesome lines...:)

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  54. I've said it before and I'll say it again:
    when you write love poems you are in your element, girl. I just want to know if you have a certain Other in mind when you write like this. Do tell!

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  55. Thank you Anonymous, whoever you are!!!

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  56. Thank you Anonymous, whoever you are!!!

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  57. Thank you NJ for visiting and commenting

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  58. Vaisakhi I agree with you. Love is a mystery. Thank you so much for your comment

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  59. LOL! Debra thank you. I guess being a romantic I am always in my element when I write love poems. The other one is an imaginary one!

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  60. How lovely. My heart smiled as I read this journey, the prose tripping through highlights of happy moments. I think we would all aspire to such a relationship that evokes that soul deep sigh of homecoming, security and contentment. Beautiful! <3

    - Dawn

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  61. Thank you Dawn. We all look for that kind of a relationship but I guess not all are that lucky

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  62. I have to agree with what sulekkha said..."Your poem raises questions which don't have any answers :) Love is an enigma, a magical experience and the most fulfilling emotion."

    Wow...such a beautiful poem. Love is so big?!

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  63. Very well done. Ah, the questions...but a lifetime of love to find the answers. Very nice.

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  64. Thank you Amy. Yes love is big and one can never understand it but only feel it

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  65. Yes Ron a lifetime to know what is love or at least find love. Thank you for reading and commentng

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  66. waow yaaaaaar what a pic and what a words for love

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  67. Thank you Nomi for visiting and commenting so nicely

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  68. Rimly,

    When you find the answers please do let me know...

    What is it about "Our Loves"

    kisss

    Jessica

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  69. LOL! Jessica if I knew you would be the first to know. Love you

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  70. Sigh... I have asked these questions a time or two myself. This love should be bottled and given away for free. We all would have a million smiles to share. :-)

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2011/12/lyric-fire-my-first-this-moment-post-.html

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  71. I know Tameka. Thank you for commenting

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  72. Not everyone had good relationship but most of them are amazing . and that poem is EMAZING :D

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  73. Thank you Anonymous for your wonderful comment

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