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Saturday, February 26, 2011

I AM….




I am their Fantasy
That fires their desires
Their hidden longings
They weave their dreams
Around me
But fail to make
Me real.

I am the “What if”
Ponderings of their life
That could have been
But lacking the conviction,
The courage to
 Give it a shape.

I am the Cauldron
Storing their panacea
For heartaches
Handing out magical potions
That makes them whole
Coming back always for more
Leaving me empty.

I am their Muse
Inspiring them to
Break into poetry
Celebrating their life
While all I have
Are sad and broken verses.

I am their Secret
Their thoughts, their desires,
And dreams are mine alone
And yet I am nothing.
While I still seek
The One in whom
Fulfillment will be mine.

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26 comments:

  1. sulekkhaFebruary 26, 2011 at 3:14 AM

    What you are is , wonderful my dear and your post is amazing. Loved it and I want more.

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  2. RimlyFebruary 26, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    Thank you my outlier. Tried to be a bit different with this one.

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  3. Sumit ChakrabortyFebruary 26, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    I Really liked it :) Nice one :)

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  4. RimlyFebruary 26, 2011 at 9:21 AM

    Thank you Sumit. Really loved your poems too.

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  5. chejom2010February 26, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Great poem..looking forward to read more on my reading list...

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  6. Sumit ChakrabortyFebruary 26, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    @Rimly Thanks a lot, i am just a beginner :)

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  7. RimlyFebruary 26, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    @Sumit keep up the soul writing.
    @Cherry thanks for your encouragement

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  8. Kiran KotaFebruary 26, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    Gr8 poetry..loved it..Visit me on http://xploreer.blogpsot.com

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  9. RimlyFebruary 26, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    Thank you Kiran. Will visit your blog.

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  10. Anirban SahaFebruary 26, 2011 at 10:26 AM

    loved it!

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  11. RimlyFebruary 26, 2011 at 10:31 AM

    Thank you Anirban

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  12. RoyalNirupamFebruary 26, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    Good, but you have the capability to improve.See i am a little older than others.pardon if you dislike.

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  13. RimlyFebruary 26, 2011 at 11:16 AM

    Thank you for your suggestion. It is refreshing.

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  14. UnknownFebruary 26, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    Enjoyed your poem Rimly, I am a thinker and when I read a poem, story etc. I often wonder what the person was feeling when they wrote it, what makes the words come out the way they do? hehe weird I know but :P that's me a thinker....

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  15. UnknownFebruary 26, 2011 at 12:06 PM

    opppies I am following you now also :)

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  16. JIMFebruary 26, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    Really great words I loved it... I am following you ( actually thought I already was??
    http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/02/few-favorite-images-from-past-week.html

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  17. SnehaFebruary 26, 2011 at 9:47 PM

    Good one...it grabbed my interest from the very first line :)

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  18. NandiniFebruary 27, 2011 at 12:27 AM

    I loved it so much...especially the last lines are so deep...
    I am their Secret
    Their thoughts, their desires,
    And dreams are mine alone
    And yet I am nothing.
    While I still seek
    The One in whom
    Fulfillment will be mine
    got to learn so much from u...amazing poetry...
    :)

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  19. ShebaFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:30 AM

    Love it Rimly... so true in many ways!! I feel it...

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  20. KritiFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:06 AM

    Beautiful Rimly - very deep and thought provoking, love it...

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  21. Papercut DollFebruary 27, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    The comments say it all but the poem says it so much more oxox

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  22. Rachel HoytFebruary 27, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    What you are is someone who knows what its like to write from the soul. There are messages the world needs to hear just floating around looking for the right pen. Beautiful poem!

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  23. Finding One's WayFebruary 27, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    Beautiful poem your word ar thought provoking

    Jessica

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  24. BongoFebruary 27, 2011 at 9:28 PM

    "And yet I am nothing.While I still seek The One in whom
    Fulfillment will be mine." how profound.....beautiful poem..I feel your words..As always..XOXOXO

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  25. SwatiFebruary 28, 2011 at 12:37 AM

    Another beautiful post Rimly...I love your poetry!!

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  26. PriyashmitaFebruary 28, 2011 at 6:09 AM

    very beautiful

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