tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post5394946674018140516..comments2023-06-01T00:32:52.991-07:00Comments on Journey: A Death…HersRimlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-43110936567187176272011-03-21T00:46:40.848-07:002011-03-21T00:46:40.848-07:00An empty shell... very deep! Great write.An empty shell... very deep! Great write.Farfalla Dreams ~ Lisa Marie Farfallahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15814072026273780357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-34630260887295531712011-03-20T10:02:48.671-07:002011-03-20T10:02:48.671-07:00Hey Parag, didnt know you were a poet too. Yes thi...Hey Parag, didnt know you were a poet too. Yes this is a side of me not many know. Thank you for your comments.Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-2559480708232266962011-03-19T12:05:25.219-07:002011-03-19T12:05:25.219-07:00and the night stood still,naked and drenched,bathe...and the night stood still,naked and drenched,bathed in silver,adorned with pearls of hope that clung on to her ravaged body.....<br />HEY RIMLI,another side to you that I did not know!<br />Keep writing. Loved this first one I read.ParagParag Hatibaruanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-69225003110015912262011-03-18T00:54:56.425-07:002011-03-18T00:54:56.425-07:00@ Bonnie thank you. xoxoxo
@ Joire thank you for y...@ Bonnie thank you. xoxoxo<br />@ Joire thank you for your comment. I love your style of writing.Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-79062667943260831502011-03-18T00:44:35.172-07:002011-03-18T00:44:35.172-07:00HI Jim thank you as always. yes it is sad and dark...HI Jim thank you as always. yes it is sad and dark. Some of the darkness is there in me or else I will not be able to write like this but I am not all darkness either, there is still light in me.:)))Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-72825955171290122402011-03-17T20:06:03.611-07:002011-03-17T20:06:03.611-07:00wish I could write poems in this manner... This is...wish I could write poems in this manner... This is overpowering, sad yet captivates the soul... Thank you for sharing..:)Jorie Paclihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06484194446148511231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-38709326561836021372011-03-17T14:15:30.091-07:002011-03-17T14:15:30.091-07:00Very dark..."“Her”, gone forever." wow s...Very dark..."“Her”, gone forever." wow says it all...thank you...As always...XOXOXOBongohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09476508632697640785noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-41429539962241422972011-03-17T12:36:11.206-07:002011-03-17T12:36:11.206-07:00A really sad dark one Rimly.. I hope you do not ha...A really sad dark one Rimly.. I hope you do not have to feel this dark to write this.. very compelling and interesting<br /><br />http://jpweddingphotograpy.blogspot.com/2011/03/dedicated-to-my-five-brothers.htmlJIMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00989023921093283471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-34529391390334785292011-03-17T10:30:34.857-07:002011-03-17T10:30:34.857-07:00Thank you Seema. Where are you?Thank you Seema. Where are you?Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-60857481078230416562011-03-17T10:29:20.656-07:002011-03-17T10:29:20.656-07:00What can I say...ur just too good pls start compil...What can I say...ur just too good pls start compiling and get a book out soon.... beautiful yet.....so sad and lonely!!! SeemaSeemahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00945657729864829185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-9465510983167064982011-03-17T09:09:44.082-07:002011-03-17T09:09:44.082-07:00@Alejandro thanks. We have no choice but to rise f...@Alejandro thanks. We have no choice but to rise from the ashes and become a new vessel to be filled with love.<br />@Mary love your sensitive comments. <br />@Rimjhim thanks darling. Dont know why you havent been able to post<br />@Swati love you for visiting and commenting.<br />@Kriti, goddess I am always at a loss for words when I read your posts. Thank you so much<br />@Nirupam great to see you here. Thank you for your commentRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-48221443823703608412011-03-17T08:23:21.167-07:002011-03-17T08:23:21.167-07:00Lovely, I can smell the wild essence of sadness ra...Lovely, I can smell the wild essence of sadness radiating from that agonized mind.Beautifully brought to us by poetess rhythmic Rimly.<br />ThanksRoyalNirupamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356254902337074309noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-8290644299191880752011-03-17T08:16:43.446-07:002011-03-17T08:16:43.446-07:00Rimly - when I come is there any way you can coach...Rimly - when I come is there any way you can coach me to write like this???? I doubt it - one must feel like you do to pour out such magical stuff. This one talks to your soul and its so very vivid. Love it as usual. Can I stop saying that last line now. Those letters on my keyboard are fading only because of you. LovelyKritihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06827714509776261027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-84828555077886067052011-03-17T07:55:24.949-07:002011-03-17T07:55:24.949-07:00lovely rimly....soulful yet dark. love your poetry...lovely rimly....soulful yet dark. love your poetry, you should seriously consider compling them into a book.<br />rimjhim<br />ps: for some reason, i am not being able to comment using my wordpress URL.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-63947363668862071672011-03-17T05:01:29.105-07:002011-03-17T05:01:29.105-07:00Ooooh Rimly, that gave me goosebumps!! Beautiful, ...Ooooh Rimly, that gave me goosebumps!! Beautiful, dark....loved it!Swatihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16738935772751436796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-81857157568451899442011-03-17T04:28:23.209-07:002011-03-17T04:28:23.209-07:00Such a great poem Rimly! Your words describing th...Such a great poem Rimly! Your words describing the very essence of emptiness...broken...shattered. How very sad for this woman to be so alone.Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18181851742870395058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-15886292740277297152011-03-17T03:39:25.360-07:002011-03-17T03:39:25.360-07:00What rises from the ashes of emptiness? A new vess...What rises from the ashes of emptiness? A new vessel to fill with love.<br /><br />Cheers Aalejandro guzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08444725035058665346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-1647926740629949452011-03-17T03:01:56.600-07:002011-03-17T03:01:56.600-07:00Frane I look forward to your comments. Thank you s...Frane I look forward to your comments. Thank you so muchRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-74368550019655035072011-03-17T03:01:15.680-07:002011-03-17T03:01:15.680-07:00YogaSavy thank you.YogaSavy thank you.Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-30945295942339699002011-03-17T03:00:10.467-07:002011-03-17T03:00:10.467-07:00Thank you OutlierThank you OutlierRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-66545705431367675192011-03-17T02:57:44.850-07:002011-03-17T02:57:44.850-07:00You described it so vividly , you can feel her pai...You described it so vividly , you can feel her pain ...almost , loved it ...<br />Frane.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-36700139067220854202011-03-17T02:53:11.763-07:002011-03-17T02:53:11.763-07:00A love that haunts the soul for peace and accpetan...A love that haunts the soul for peace and accpetanceSavira Guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17463773284421101573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-7150225633704770482011-03-17T02:46:39.272-07:002011-03-17T02:46:39.272-07:00My god!!!! what a sad and hauntingly beautiful poe...My god!!!! what a sad and hauntingly beautiful poem!!!1 Rimly you are a fantastic poetess,love it.sulekkhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06022718430683943561noreply@blogger.com