tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post4686518027012685461..comments2023-06-01T00:32:52.991-07:00Comments on Journey: DUSKRimlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comBlogger70125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-36049904858006454552012-05-07T06:25:58.295-07:002012-05-07T06:25:58.295-07:00So true Lisa. I love what you said that what we fo...So true Lisa. I love what you said that what we focus on or fee will grow ans what we dont focus on or starve will fade or die. Thank you so much for your wonderful commentRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-63502348648167731022012-05-06T22:18:28.420-07:002012-05-06T22:18:28.420-07:00This is so mysterious and intriguing! I think we ...This is so mysterious and intriguing! I think we are all half light and half dark, half hope and half despair. "Hope deferred makes a heart sick." What we focus on or feed will grow and what we don't focus on or starve, will fade or die...so to say?! This is a great reminder to me, to pay attention to what is consuming my thoughts and what I see! Without vision we perish! We need to hold onto HOPE in order to bring ourselves out of the pit of despair. Beautiful poem and very thought provoking! I love it!!!Farfalla Dreams ~ Lisa Marie Farfallahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15814072026273780357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-28524014897378002062012-05-06T06:55:28.343-07:002012-05-06T06:55:28.343-07:00Thank you JerlyThank you JerlyRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-14093228280542963402012-05-05T04:45:50.252-07:002012-05-05T04:45:50.252-07:00Intriguing. I Love the feel you create to your poe...Intriguing. I Love the feel you create to your poetryJerlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13897355836151249751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-85549448767087147752012-05-04T07:22:39.797-07:002012-05-04T07:22:39.797-07:00Thank you my dear sis. Havent seen you in a long t...Thank you my dear sis. Havent seen you in a long time. I am good. You? What plans of coming this side of the world?Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-72094368664134888022012-05-04T07:13:16.643-07:002012-05-04T07:13:16.643-07:00There are times when I feel like dusk-when I am ne...There are times when I feel like dusk-when I am neither here or there. Stopping by after a long time sista-hope all is well. As for your poems-they are just getting better and better.<br />Rimjhim<br />www.sukanyabora.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-73162517785769372902012-05-03T22:36:58.910-07:002012-05-03T22:36:58.910-07:00Thank you so much Mary.Thank you so much Mary.Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-56441878348799191312012-05-03T22:35:59.809-07:002012-05-03T22:35:59.809-07:00Thank you Nelieta. Have a great week and weekend a...Thank you Nelieta. Have a great week and weekend as well. xoxoRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-54697298677165728492012-05-03T03:40:54.062-07:002012-05-03T03:40:54.062-07:00Rimly, your image captures one's attention imm...Rimly, your image captures one's attention immediately and the poem goes right along with it. You have done a great job with this one! Thanks for sharing ☺Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18181851742870395058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-42047080938685991422012-04-30T07:06:16.111-07:002012-04-30T07:06:16.111-07:00Love the contrast in this poem between dark and li...Love the contrast in this poem between dark and light. Great poem Rimly! Have a blessed week.Nelietahttp://nelmitravel.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-20016090903749425142012-04-30T05:46:25.980-07:002012-04-30T05:46:25.980-07:00Yes, I agree Myrna. Do we really know ourselves, l...Yes, I agree Myrna. Do we really know ourselves, leave alone the people around us. Thank you for your lovely commentRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-10098351303549180702012-04-30T05:44:43.231-07:002012-04-30T05:44:43.231-07:00I loved your post. Yes it does set the tone for va...I loved your post. Yes it does set the tone for vampires...dusk...the twilight zone. Thank you for visiting and reading, BrianRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-77673727575908728452012-04-30T05:43:01.495-07:002012-04-30T05:43:01.495-07:00Thank you so much ClaudiaThank you so much ClaudiaRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-15640418115955712892012-04-29T06:34:38.089-07:002012-04-29T06:34:38.089-07:00I like this. I felt an inkling of sadness, but an...I like this. I felt an inkling of sadness, but an acceptance of the darkness within (which we all have) and mostly hide. And who knows us entirely? No one, maybe not even ourselves. I like the imagery with dusk - we are neither light or darkness, we are both.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-4499242652206836072012-04-29T05:20:37.697-07:002012-04-29T05:20:37.697-07:00oh this is really good...dusk is such a magical ti...oh this is really good...dusk is such a magical time anyways...i love positioning of 'in between' as that sets the vampire perfectly and you de set some tension well in this too...do you really know me...and what i will do...a bit of a conscience...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-88035450185598339982012-04-29T01:03:00.010-07:002012-04-29T01:03:00.010-07:00nice...you manage to capture that tension beautifu...nice...you manage to capture that tension beautifully..think we have both of it in us and depends on lots of things what finally comes to the surface..but in the end...it's what we are and how we are...what we allow to be seen..and then the question..do you know me..? nicely pennedClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-90488260000240824242012-04-28T22:31:58.680-07:002012-04-28T22:31:58.680-07:00Thank you Rachel. xoxoThank you Rachel. xoxoRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-51579977725129280542012-04-28T12:44:20.507-07:002012-04-28T12:44:20.507-07:00Simply amazing imagery. Dusk is neither here nor ...Simply amazing imagery. Dusk is neither here nor there... it awaits the enveloping darkness... <br /><br />Powerful words. xoxoRachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-52193580529640238442012-04-27T03:22:52.387-07:002012-04-27T03:22:52.387-07:00Thank you so much Mani. xoxoThank you so much Mani. xoxoRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-21901913822306824332012-04-27T03:18:23.946-07:002012-04-27T03:18:23.946-07:00Great post rim...wonderful!Great post rim...wonderful!Manisha Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09383434139941400003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-2061888251898591722012-04-27T02:38:42.579-07:002012-04-27T02:38:42.579-07:00Thank you sweet Portia for transforming my poem to...Thank you sweet Portia for transforming my poem to a prayer. The twilight is a time of day I am not very comfortable with, hence this poem.Rimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-20516476454941527482012-04-27T02:37:05.109-07:002012-04-27T02:37:05.109-07:00I know Jessica. We are all playing roles. So you t...I know Jessica. We are all playing roles. So you too have joined this competition? I must check it out. Thank you for commentingRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-8502463587859704002012-04-27T02:35:26.705-07:002012-04-27T02:35:26.705-07:00The story of most of our lives Erin. :((( Thanks f...The story of most of our lives Erin. :((( Thanks for dropping by to read and commentRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-29305704534502996012012-04-27T02:34:19.112-07:002012-04-27T02:34:19.112-07:00Hi Irene great to see you here. Thank you so much ...Hi Irene great to see you here. Thank you so much for reading and commentingRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5582721394362431419.post-80091054357897391582012-04-27T00:13:29.605-07:002012-04-27T00:13:29.605-07:00I felt this poem almost spiritual, like an evening...I felt this poem almost spiritual, like an evening prayer by a soul intrigued by life. The twilight always brings such thoughts in my mind when I look out of the window at the darkening sky. Yopu are too good, dear Rimly!<br />-PortiaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com